literature

A Sad Day

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I once saw a way to do it right.
The path of what is true.
But now the boundries are broken down.
I used to see my strengths,
but those have since weakened.
I used to see merely weakness,
but now there's only incompetence.

Crushed under a waterfall.
Surrounded by a teary sea of doubt.
Confusion holds me down,
Blurring my vision,
As I search through the dark.
I can't see up,
Can't feel down.
Morality becomes a shadow of itself.
Is there a right?
Is there a wrong?
This isn't my best work, I know, it's really just my meagre attempt to express what I've been feeling the last few weeks, and maybe even help explain why I've chosen to do some things recently.
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tigerpusen05's avatar
I love the second verse - it's really good, hun.